Journal - How did you choose to breakdown your 5 paragraphs of information for your essay? You need an introduction and a conclusion but what are your middle three paragraphs about? Have you found your outline helpful? Why or why not?
I broke down the other three with groups of information on my topic. One of the paragraphs was how obesity affects people lives. I talked about health risks and percent and statistics of people who develop it. My second paragraph was about the causes and risks factors about obesity. I talked about diet and history. In my third paragraph, I talked about prevention. I talked about diet and exercise. The outline made it very easy cause I just followed it and added a little more information.
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